DEV. I love your VN and I like where the story is going. This is definitely NOT a porn game. I hope you pay no mind to what that person says and just keep doing what you're doing. Anyways please tell me the name of the music that plays when you have free time AND MY LIFE IS YOURS
Thank you so much for the kind words! Most of the music I use was licensed from WOWSound, with a few exceptions. The track that plays during Free Time is called The Beginning of Time, in the Anime Romantic pack :)
Hi Dev love your story. This game would be considered to be a Visual Novel with Adult content. Please don’t respond to any post that wishes to argue with you. First reason you don’t know what state of mind that person is in. Second reason you don’t know how far they will take the argument. Learn from my mistake I was a mod and I made a player mad they hacked me and stalked me online a few years ago. It was a pain to clean the mess up they caused and I was not able to do anything about that person because they weren’t even from the same country. So please be careful. Take Care ;)
Hit the View All By VictorSeven button in the top right or just go to my profile. The only thing that's publicly available is the H-Gallery add-on, and we have 1 character in Early Access for T4 supporters and above, but it'll be made available to the public when it's finished.
Hey all. So far, so good. I am currently playing into chapter 4, but I am very bad a choice games. I get very frustrated when I get tired. Is there a walkthrough for the "Choises" Yet? Is it on Patreon or Discord? Thanks.
Yeah you can pop into the Discord and I can help ya out. Lemme know which Trial you're stuck on. It seems you're not the only one who isn't having fun with the Trials, so I'm thinking of adding a Cinematic/Walkthrough mode that highlights the right choices for you.
The #wca-questions channel would be the right one :)
Ah. I think I found it. I had another coder help me with a couple of things, and he inserted a name command in the beginning of Wither B and E. I've commented them out and they'll be fixed next patch. Thank you!
Thank you so much! There's a lot of discussion in the Discord and we're very responsive there, if you feel like joining. Also do DLC giveaways here and there :
loved the new parts so as to not spoil things at one point i shouted kamahamaha. short but loving it . i very much enjoy stuff with wither,(and want to see much more of her), but i hope all the girls get equal time and development
Glad you like it! Sound and music design is super important to me. You'll hear the music evolve over the course of the story as I come into possession of more and more music packs, and include some sneaky references and easter eggs here and there as well :P
I dedicate an entire development step to scoring a scene, so the fact that it's noticed is appreciated!
Played it some, and so far it seems nice. Not gotten far yet but it is promising. I however cannot open the replay gallery, i just get an error and then sent to a new game.
I like checking how many i've unlocked so far compared to how many there are, but not able to do that which makes me alittle sad.
Hmm that means a blank FantasiesCollection.rpa may have still made it into the files. The replay gallery is a paid DLC feature so the standard version shouldn't have it. I'll have to check the files and see where the issue is.
You will, however, be able to see which girls you're unlocking once you get partway into Season 2 and gain access to the Free Time system :)
Alright, I'm now confused lol. I just unpacked the 1.4.0.1 version of the game, and I'm not seeing a "Replay Gallery" button anywhere. The only button should be "Fantasies Collection," and that should be in the main menu without the game running, and only if the DLC was purchased and added to the game. Where are you seeing a "Replay Gallery" button? Are you on version 1.4.0.1? Or do you have the current free version?
I am on 1.3.5.4 as i have not paid for your game and only trying out the free version. But i see it here. I find it in options menu, but not when i am just at the start screen or going to save the game.
Ahh that must be before I did the fix, then. Should be fine in 1.4.0.1. Look in the Game folder for a file called FantasiesCollection.rpa. Should be 0KB. Delete it if you have it and that button shouldn't show up anymore.
i've played for the 1st frew chapters (i'm on the infirmary part now) and when i tried to open the gallery it gives an error, is it supposed to only work after we get farther into the story? is it a paid thing? (i saw you have another app for that) ... or is it a bug?
[code]
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "renpy/common/00action_menu.rpy", line 117, in __call__
raise Exception("%r is not a screen or a label." % orig_screen)
Exception: u'replay_gallery' is not a screen or a label.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 28, in script
Yeah that version shipped with an empty FantasiesCollection.rpa file in the Game folder. That's a paid feature and the presence of the RPA unlocks it, but without any data in the RPA it doesn't work. That's fixed in 1.4.0.0, which also includes a whole new Main Story episode.
Here's Rukah and Wither, one of our Dryad characters.
Is it Orcs specifically that you're looking for, or do you like muscular girls in general? 'cause we have more of those that aren't Orcs. For instance, here's Galka, our goliath character:
i seem to be missing 1 core character and 2 secret characters, need help on how i have to unlock them the core is the one next to galka, and the the 2 secret charaters to the left are missing, i got the 2 to the right
Hey, the 2 leftmost Secret characters don't have any content yet. They're waiting on some main story stuff but I had to make sure to put the unlock flags in when you made the choices that included them in your game.
The ones on the left or right of Galka are also waiting on Main Story stuff, so I think you got everything! I may have thrown unlock flags in to prepare them for future patches. Sorry for the confusion :
For joiplay players, the game seems to function if you change edit the game type to renpy (python2). That's using the current up to date version of joiplay+add-ons.
Hey! Thanks for the kind words. I'll be pushing an update soon that smooths out some of the admittedly rough first few episodes of the game and also adds DLC and Fantasies Collection functionality, as well as QoL updates like the ability to turn off the jumpscares.
The T1 limit thing is an old holdover that I completely forgot about. Lemme revisit that lol
Thank you for taking the time to respond. I'll sign up for SS once I'm done here then lol
That first jump-scare got me real good, despite how clearly telegraphed it was xD wasn't the worst though, I won't complain about having more options. I think I'll sit on the game for now, till ya drop that update, so I get a better first experience ^v^
So far I have met the gobbos, things have been pretty smooth. The stalker vibe is really intense, the dream sequence really clinched the fear we should have about her. Great stuff.
On 1.3.5.1 - i.e. current free version. Overall impression is good, though some feedback/criticism from a new player PoV:
You've got a few issues with the plotlines which I presume is due to rewrites - some stuff is explained twice. So far I'm seeing Mrs. Clements - there's stuff the first time you bring Ember paperwork where Ember makes comments about judges and witness protection that's not actually remembered later when Ember actually puts things together. Second one is Gilly's backstory - the MC forgets that Chiara asked the "Do you know her surname/parents" earlier when it's mentioned a second time and fully explained - first time she just said something like 'it's not my place to tell you'. Then, later, Gillie explains things again. I suspect that the second time (Chiara telling you) is a remnant of changes. Third one is Druthari where, during free play at MC's house she explains that there was a betrayal and ogres, and then the next one the MC doesn't prompt/seem to remember at all about it when we get more backstory. Could probably do with a change to the MC's text to "ah, about the betrayal..." or something like that?
Overall, very ambitious number of girls. A variety of bodies and kinks, though a bit lacking in chubby/fat girls so far. I have a few worries regarding characters dropping off plotwise for a while - with that many chars you just can't see them all frequently. Possibly locking the freeroam content behind a bit more main quest could alleviate that? Also feels weird immediately unlocking freeroam and just... dumping into 4 scenes with one char. I'm thinking something like unlock first two on the first freeroam, second two on the second, or so, if there's two freeroams of that time period in the episode? Maybe this isn't feasible until the season is finished, but probably should be born in mind.
Lastly, ghost/mirror girl feels... left out. Appears early, then disappears and isn't thought about by MC until appearing in E4? Feels like she could do with some explanation or worry from MC, as by then she's not just appearing to warn of deaths (appears during cellar/lab scene before... nothing). This may be a consequence of the high number of main girls and fitting everything in. May also flow better when she reappears.
Yeah, the double-explains were pointed out and need to be shored up. Even though Season 1 got a rework, it's still in need of some heavy polishing. The early renders are garbage and as the story progresses, I become less and less happy with the writing.
As far as the girls go... Are you still playing the build, or have you finished it? I don't wanna say too much because of spoilers, but I went with a very Something For Everyone approach. I don't cover quite everything, but there are a couple of thicker girls like Kanako and Saffryn in there.
And as far as Kageshini goes, the next patch is a Main Story patch that features her VERY heavily. I'd love to have all the girls get some spotlight on a rotation, but I also have to consider what makes sense in the story, and given her limitations, I felt it was better to leave her more of a mystery for now until you actually get to meet her face-to-face.
Again thanks for the feedback! Making notes on the double-explains so I can go back and shore those up.
Pinup Packs are just special folders full of HD images of the girls, since people want to see more of them and ask for more constantly. You can use them as wallpapers or banners or whatever you like. They don't affect the game or get installed into the game at all.
enjoyed the recent update and all the side quests. sad no main story. also mc should at one point soon mention ghillies family connection or seemed connection to clements. looking forward to more main and side stories loved the wither stuff ,hope to see more druthari and all the elves and goblins. i always get emotional play this game and crimson high
This was really good, except for one detail that makes me feel like the MC isn't as great as he gets talked up to be by both himself and the security team. You'd think he would have mentioned the coincidence of Gillie's family and Ms.Clements family in the several times those events and their timelines were mentioned if they were as good at seeing details as they claimed to be. Even if they aren't actually connected in the story, it was a very obvious coincidence that any halfway intelligent lifeform would have noticed right away.
Mystery is a very tough subgenre to write. You have to balance the intrigue of what's going on but also leave room for the reader to come to the conclusions, because the draw of mystery is figuring things out before they're directly stated in the work. I should probably mention I don't specialize in mystery, so the gaps I left in characters mentioning things so that the reader could put the pieces together without being outright TOLD what the answer is may not have presented as well as I'd hoped. Most of my experience is in the Fantasy genre for my 24 years of writing experience, and though I've been a professional Dungeon Master before and have run plenty of tabletop games over the past 6 years, writing a mystery for tabletop players and for an AVN like this are two very different things.
What I was HOPING to do was set up all the details and let YOU, the player, connect the dots before they came together in the story. If that made Aurum seem a little dumb or oblivious, I suppose that's a side effect of leaving that sort of room for the player. In having had many, many different TRPG players, readers of my series, and players of WCA, I've learned that everyone figures things out at a different pace, if at all in some cases. Someone like you, cursed with a fast pace, is going to figure things out much quicker than someone who takes a while to connect the dots. And I can't write for only one type of reader, so I did what I felt would make sense to the majority of readers.
That being said, hope you enjoy the rest of the game :) I do appreciate the feedback, as it will help inform how I do things in the future.
That's a fair way to describe the difference in players, I probably wouldn't have even brought it up if the MC wasn't so hyped up on noticing things tbh.
That said, I did really enjoy the story and look forward to the rest. Your TTRPG experience shows and this gave me a good replacement for the week my group couldn't get together(always seems to happen when we are just a few sessions shy of the end too)
Appreciate the kind words. I hope my logic sort of makes sense.
I feel you on the scheduling thing. Dunno if you watch TTRPG content, but I do have an ongoing game that's preserved in my Twitch Collections if ever ya want something extra to watch. https://www.twitch.tv/collections/V__T1BiR9hfcow
So, most older security radios, including the ones I've worked with, have attachments you can put on them such as lapel mics/parrots or sleeve/earpiece attachments. They still require the base unit to function. What I'm trying to sell here is that there is the base unit on his waist and he's got it hooked up to a sleeve mic. Unfortunately, Ai Shoujo doesn't have any really good cord attachments (or didn't at the time) so I didn't bother trying to show the attached "cord." You'll find I did the same with Galka and selling the illusion of a parrot/lapel mic.
No, and I don't think that's a kink I'll be adding for a few reasons, one of which being the science of the worlds. Most species' biology isn't compatible with human biology. So if that's a kink you're looking for, sorry to disappoint, but no plans to add pregnancy thus far.
WCA is a lot more about the story and the emotional connection than the kinks, though, so if you're hunting for a specific kink or fetish, there are way better games for that. If you're looking for story depth and emotional tension, where intimacy really means something, that's more in line with what WCA is about. Yes, we do explore certain kinks, but I find it hard to include things like pregnancy because it's something I'm not into, and writing something you have no love of can really feel cheap and do it a disservice to those who DO like it. And I don't wanna do that with something that someone loves.
yea, though my thoughts on the pregnancy is not much of a kink, i would say it's a way of life to cross the bridge with someone you love and to boost their confidences to make them feel loved and the meaning behind it, it's only natural to give the one you love a world that you can share that love with through thick and thin.
That's a really good explanation, and I can sort of see what you mean when you say it that way. I'm still tossing around the idea of individual ending scenes for each girl when you complete her side story, but being a harem story, I'm not sure how well that'll work. And I still may be the wrong person to write it, as someone who is never having kids. But I do appreciate your explanation and perspective.
I gotta say you have one hell of a game here! Extremely well made with a great story. One of the very few vn were i did not mind the slow burn at all. I do have to ask one thing though, as I played through the android version I seen on the comment here that there is 49 characters story's to go through and I barely have 20 ish. How do I get the dlc and some of the extra characters or are they only in the pc version?
Hey! The 1.0 release saw the Season 1 Rework, completion of Season 1, and finalizing of backend systems so there will be no more restarts.
We're currently on Season 2, and a lot of content is still being made. None of the DLC characters have been released to supporters or public yet, and only about half of the Core cast even has side story scenes. A lot of the content is still being made. We will have a side content patch out within the next couple of months that will bring 4 girls up to a total of 5 side scenes each. After that, there will be a main story patch.
Thanks for the kind words! We have a wonderful Discord community, and you're welcome to join!
Is it finally time to download the update and start a fresh save to see what all has changed and what new content there is? *looks at last progress report* 2 days ago... good news... aight, I wait a little bit longer then! Lol
Hey! Since the 1.0 release, all backend systems have been finalized. If your last save was in the beta version (0.*.*.*), this is the last time you'll have to restart. If your save was from a version after 1.0, you won't have to restart at all.
The story is currently on Season 2 Episode 3, and the next update will be a side content wave featuring 4 girls and a surprise scene from a secret 5th :
Main story will be updated in the patch following to Season 2 Episode 4.
yep, read the most recent lil progress log you posted which is why I said I will wait for the next update to start over. I had already seen others bring up save issues and your reply about having to start a new save, and since I last played when this was 2 separate "games" I will most definitely have to restart lol. Which is still good, I get to see if anything has changed then I get to see what you have added :D
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DEV. I love your VN and I like where the story is going. This is definitely NOT a porn game. I hope you pay no mind to what that person says and just keep doing what you're doing. Anyways please tell me the name of the music that plays when you have free time AND MY LIFE IS YOURS
Thank you so much for the kind words! Most of the music I use was licensed from WOWSound, with a few exceptions. The track that plays during Free Time is called The Beginning of Time, in the Anime Romantic pack :)
Hi Dev love your story. This game would be considered to be a Visual Novel with Adult content. Please don’t respond to any post that wishes to argue with you. First reason you don’t know what state of mind that person is in. Second reason you don’t know how far they will take the argument. Learn from my mistake I was a mod and I made a player mad they hacked me and stalked me online a few years ago. It was a pain to clean the mess up they caused and I was not able to do anything about that person because they weren’t even from the same country. So please be careful. Take Care ;)
Thank you for the kind words.
where are the dlcs? and how much content does it have?
Hit the View All By VictorSeven button in the top right or just go to my profile. The only thing that's publicly available is the H-Gallery add-on, and we have 1 character in Early Access for T4 supporters and above, but it'll be made available to the public when it's finished.
Hey all. So far, so good. I am currently playing into chapter 4, but I am very bad a choice games. I get very frustrated when I get tired. Is there a walkthrough for the "Choises" Yet? Is it on Patreon or Discord? Thanks.
Yeah you can pop into the Discord and I can help ya out. Lemme know which Trial you're stuck on. It seems you're not the only one who isn't having fun with the Trials, so I'm thinking of adding a Cinematic/Walkthrough mode that highlights the right choices for you.
The #wca-questions channel would be the right one :)
I changed the name of my character and noticed that the name was changed back into aurum during one of wither's free time scenes
Hey! Was it her last scene? I've heard this comment a couple of times and I'm having trouble finding where that might be.
It's the scene where Wither is teaching the first lesson. The first line is "Alright, Wither. I'm ready for my first lesson."
Ah. I think I found it. I had another coder help me with a couple of things, and he inserted a name command in the beginning of Wither B and E. I've commented them out and they'll be fixed next patch. Thank you!
I was wondering, will
the Clements daughtersever be found?We're aiming to resolve Ms. Clements' story in S2E7!
That rabbit looks stoned as fuck.
Where are you seeing a rabbit?
Lol I think he is referring to when mc goes to visit sera, mc comments that the rabbit looks stoned as fuck, it's the stuffed animal.
AH. See, context helps lol. There are so many renders in this game, sometimes I forget what's in 'em.
Downloaded recent update, but says episode 4 still not available. I do something wrong?
That shouldn't be happening... contact me on Discord and we'll figure out what's going on.
So I just binged this. Holy hell this is good. Thank you so much for your work. It's really a story I'm now aggressively waiting a continuation of.
Thank you so much! There's a lot of discussion in the Discord and we're very responsive there, if you feel like joining. Also do DLC giveaways here and there :
loved the new parts so as to not spoil things at one point i shouted kamahamaha. short but loving it . i very much enjoy stuff with wither,(and want to see much more of her), but i hope all the girls get equal time and development
Just downloaded the game and opened it, and holy moly the start screen song is a banger!
Glad you like it! Sound and music design is super important to me. You'll hear the music evolve over the course of the story as I come into possession of more and more music packs, and include some sneaky references and easter eggs here and there as well :P
I dedicate an entire development step to scoring a scene, so the fact that it's noticed is appreciated!
Played it some, and so far it seems nice. Not gotten far yet but it is promising. I however cannot open the replay gallery, i just get an error and then sent to a new game.
I like checking how many i've unlocked so far compared to how many there are, but not able to do that which makes me alittle sad.
Hmm that means a blank FantasiesCollection.rpa may have still made it into the files. The replay gallery is a paid DLC feature so the standard version shouldn't have it. I'll have to check the files and see where the issue is.
You will, however, be able to see which girls you're unlocking once you get partway into Season 2 and gain access to the Free Time system :)
Alright, I'm now confused lol. I just unpacked the 1.4.0.1 version of the game, and I'm not seeing a "Replay Gallery" button anywhere. The only button should be "Fantasies Collection," and that should be in the main menu without the game running, and only if the DLC was purchased and added to the game. Where are you seeing a "Replay Gallery" button? Are you on version 1.4.0.1? Or do you have the current free version?
Ahh that must be before I did the fix, then. Should be fine in 1.4.0.1. Look in the Game folder for a file called FantasiesCollection.rpa. Should be 0KB. Delete it if you have it and that button shouldn't show up anymore.
i've played for the 1st frew chapters (i'm on the infirmary part now) and when i tried to open the gallery it gives an error, is it supposed to only work after we get farther into the story? is it a paid thing? (i saw you have another app for that) ... or is it a bug?
[code]
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "renpy/common/00action_menu.rpy", line 117, in __call__
raise Exception("%r is not a screen or a label." % orig_screen)
Exception: u'replay_gallery' is not a screen or a label.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 28, in script
python hide:
File "renpy/ast.py", line 823, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "renpy/python.py", line 1178, in py_exec_bytecode
exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 28, in <module>
python hide:
File "renpy/common/_layout/screen_main_menu.rpym", line 35, in _execute_python_hide
ui.interact()
File "renpy/ui.py", line 301, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2166, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, pause_modal=pause_modal, **kwargs) # type: ignore
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3208, in interact_core
rv = root_widget.event(ev, x, y, 0)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1202, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/transition.py", line 53, in event
return self.new_widget.event(ev, x, y, st) # E1101
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1202, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1202, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/screen.py", line 793, in event
rv = self.child.event(ev, x, y, st)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1202, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/layout.py", line 1202, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 1174, in event
return handle_click(self.clicked)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 1095, in handle_click
rv = run(action)
File "renpy/display/behavior.py", line 395, in run
return action(*args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/common/00action_menu.rpy", line 117, in __call__
raise Exception("%r is not a screen or a label." % orig_screen)
Exception: u'replay_gallery' is not a screen or a label.
Windows-10-10.0.19041 AMD64
Ren'Py 7.7.2.24061201
Worlds Crossing Academy 1.3.5.4
Tue Jan 7 18:04:59 2025
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Yeah that version shipped with an empty FantasiesCollection.rpa file in the Game folder. That's a paid feature and the presence of the RPA unlocks it, but without any data in the RPA it doesn't work. That's fixed in 1.4.0.0, which also includes a whole new Main Story episode.
Is there a famale Orc in this game ?.
There is. Her name is Rukah. Though she's very different from what you'd expect from your typical Orc.
What does she look like ?. May I see a picture.
Here's Rukah and Wither, one of our Dryad characters.
Is it Orcs specifically that you're looking for, or do you like muscular girls in general? 'cause we have more of those that aren't Orcs. For instance, here's Galka, our goliath character:
i seem to be missing 1 core character and 2 secret characters, need help on how i have to unlock them the core is the one next to galka, and the the 2 secret charaters to the left are missing, i got the 2 to the right
Hey, the 2 leftmost Secret characters don't have any content yet. They're waiting on some main story stuff but I had to make sure to put the unlock flags in when you made the choices that included them in your game.
The ones on the left or right of Galka are also waiting on Main Story stuff, so I think you got everything! I may have thrown unlock flags in to prepare them for future patches. Sorry for the confusion :
thats ok, im glad i unlocked everyone, ready for next set :)
For joiplay players, the game seems to function if you change edit the game type to renpy (python2). That's using the current up to date version of joiplay+add-ons.
Neat looking vn. Been looking for a slower burning story to follow. May look at subbbing up, shame the 2$ tier on SS is capped at 10 subscriber's lol
Should be in touch again soon. That fantasy collection looks interesting.
Thanks for your effort in the game, to date. Merry Christmas and all that. c:
Hey! Thanks for the kind words. I'll be pushing an update soon that smooths out some of the admittedly rough first few episodes of the game and also adds DLC and Fantasies Collection functionality, as well as QoL updates like the ability to turn off the jumpscares.
The T1 limit thing is an old holdover that I completely forgot about. Lemme revisit that lol
Hey you!
Thank you for taking the time to respond. I'll sign up for SS once I'm done here then lol
That first jump-scare got me real good, despite how clearly telegraphed it was xD wasn't the worst though, I won't complain about having more options. I think I'll sit on the game for now, till ya drop that update, so I get a better first experience ^v^
So far I have met the gobbos, things have been pretty smooth. The stalker vibe is really intense, the dream sequence really clinched the fear we should have about her. Great stuff.
Thanks again!
has virus be warned
No virus, bud. Make sure your 7Zip is updated if you're using that; there's a vulnerability in older versions.
On 1.3.5.1 - i.e. current free version. Overall impression is good, though some feedback/criticism from a new player PoV:
You've got a few issues with the plotlines which I presume is due to rewrites - some stuff is explained twice. So far I'm seeing Mrs. Clements - there's stuff the first time you bring Ember paperwork where Ember makes comments about judges and witness protection that's not actually remembered later when Ember actually puts things together. Second one is Gilly's backstory - the MC forgets that Chiara asked the "Do you know her surname/parents" earlier when it's mentioned a second time and fully explained - first time she just said something like 'it's not my place to tell you'. Then, later, Gillie explains things again. I suspect that the second time (Chiara telling you) is a remnant of changes. Third one is Druthari where, during free play at MC's house she explains that there was a betrayal and ogres, and then the next one the MC doesn't prompt/seem to remember at all about it when we get more backstory. Could probably do with a change to the MC's text to "ah, about the betrayal..." or something like that?
Overall, very ambitious number of girls. A variety of bodies and kinks, though a bit lacking in chubby/fat girls so far. I have a few worries regarding characters dropping off plotwise for a while - with that many chars you just can't see them all frequently. Possibly locking the freeroam content behind a bit more main quest could alleviate that? Also feels weird immediately unlocking freeroam and just... dumping into 4 scenes with one char. I'm thinking something like unlock first two on the first freeroam, second two on the second, or so, if there's two freeroams of that time period in the episode? Maybe this isn't feasible until the season is finished, but probably should be born in mind.
Lastly, ghost/mirror girl feels... left out. Appears early, then disappears and isn't thought about by MC until appearing in E4? Feels like she could do with some explanation or worry from MC, as by then she's not just appearing to warn of deaths (appears during cellar/lab scene before... nothing). This may be a consequence of the high number of main girls and fitting everything in. May also flow better when she reappears.
Hey! Appreciate the feedback!
Yeah, the double-explains were pointed out and need to be shored up. Even though Season 1 got a rework, it's still in need of some heavy polishing. The early renders are garbage and as the story progresses, I become less and less happy with the writing.
As far as the girls go... Are you still playing the build, or have you finished it? I don't wanna say too much because of spoilers, but I went with a very Something For Everyone approach. I don't cover quite everything, but there are a couple of thicker girls like Kanako and Saffryn in there.
And as far as Kageshini goes, the next patch is a Main Story patch that features her VERY heavily. I'd love to have all the girls get some spotlight on a rotation, but I also have to consider what makes sense in the story, and given her limitations, I felt it was better to leave her more of a mystery for now until you actually get to meet her face-to-face.
Again thanks for the feedback! Making notes on the double-explains so I can go back and shore those up.
hi, can i ask what is this pinup packs for in download section. Can i ask how to install it?
Pinup Packs are just special folders full of HD images of the girls, since people want to see more of them and ask for more constantly. You can use them as wallpapers or banners or whatever you like. They don't affect the game or get installed into the game at all.
enjoyed the recent update and all the side quests. sad no main story. also mc should at one point soon mention ghillies family connection or seemed connection to clements. looking forward to more main and side stories loved the wither stuff ,hope to see more druthari and all the elves and goblins. i always get emotional play this game and crimson high
We're alternating Main Story and Side Story updates. Next one will be the full Season 2 Episode 4. Glad you enjoyed it!
This was really good, except for one detail that makes me feel like the MC isn't as great as he gets talked up to be by both himself and the security team. You'd think he would have mentioned the coincidence of Gillie's family and Ms.Clements family in the several times those events and their timelines were mentioned if they were as good at seeing details as they claimed to be. Even if they aren't actually connected in the story, it was a very obvious coincidence that any halfway intelligent lifeform would have noticed right away.
Mystery is a very tough subgenre to write. You have to balance the intrigue of what's going on but also leave room for the reader to come to the conclusions, because the draw of mystery is figuring things out before they're directly stated in the work. I should probably mention I don't specialize in mystery, so the gaps I left in characters mentioning things so that the reader could put the pieces together without being outright TOLD what the answer is may not have presented as well as I'd hoped. Most of my experience is in the Fantasy genre for my 24 years of writing experience, and though I've been a professional Dungeon Master before and have run plenty of tabletop games over the past 6 years, writing a mystery for tabletop players and for an AVN like this are two very different things.
What I was HOPING to do was set up all the details and let YOU, the player, connect the dots before they came together in the story. If that made Aurum seem a little dumb or oblivious, I suppose that's a side effect of leaving that sort of room for the player. In having had many, many different TRPG players, readers of my series, and players of WCA, I've learned that everyone figures things out at a different pace, if at all in some cases. Someone like you, cursed with a fast pace, is going to figure things out much quicker than someone who takes a while to connect the dots. And I can't write for only one type of reader, so I did what I felt would make sense to the majority of readers.
That being said, hope you enjoy the rest of the game :) I do appreciate the feedback, as it will help inform how I do things in the future.
That's a fair way to describe the difference in players, I probably wouldn't have even brought it up if the MC wasn't so hyped up on noticing things tbh.
That said, I did really enjoy the story and look forward to the rest. Your TTRPG experience shows and this gave me a good replacement for the week my group couldn't get together(always seems to happen when we are just a few sessions shy of the end too)
Appreciate the kind words. I hope my logic sort of makes sense.
I feel you on the scheduling thing. Dunno if you watch TTRPG content, but I do have an ongoing game that's preserved in my Twitch Collections if ever ya want something extra to watch. https://www.twitch.tv/collections/V__T1BiR9hfcow
这游戏真是太他妈的棒了。我本来以为这种欧美风3D建模不是我的菜，但是实际玩过之后才发现这和我刻板印象里的粗制滥造大妈脸欧美风3D建模完全不一样，建模的细致程度真的令人叹为观止，我不会剧透，但是某个女孩换上新衣服后的展示旋转镜头真的让我忍不住“哇”出了声，我相信只要是玩过这游戏的人就绝对知道我在指哪一幕，因为这太令人印象深刻了。剧情也很棒，不愧是小说家脚本，哪怕我玩的是机翻，隔着一层语言和机器翻译的障壁也很好的把出色的剧情传达给了我，请问作者有没有添加中文翻译的计划？以及，我和评论区的其他人一样也很喜欢痛揍某个说话很装逼的混蛋的一幕，说实话，我做梦都没有想到我练的武在H游戏里也能派上用场（我是不是又加重了中国人都会功夫的刻板印象哈哈）我真的很喜欢主角是个习武之人的设定，希望后续剧情里能让主角更多的和其他人过过招，（尤其是那个被揍成傻逼还不悔改的绑架犯，这已经不是一般的混蛋了，必须得出重拳，我请求添加在他造成的风波平息后再次狠狠地揍他一顿的场景，我按捺不住想把他的头踹飞的欲望）我打的很过瘾！我会尽量在中文互联网上宣传你的游戏的，好游戏不该被埋没！
我正在使用谷歌翻译来回复此内容，所以我希望一切都表达正确。
非常感谢您的好意！我真的希望在这个类型中做些不同的事情。我从小就玩这些精彩的 SquareEnix RPG，这些角色写得很漂亮，很仔细，但他们从来没有给你机会去探索你与这些角色的联系意味着什么。同样，在成人游戏类型中，“故事”总是这些可笑的借口，让你转向下一个顽皮的场景。我想弥合这两种类型的故事之间的差距，并包括两个世界中最好的部分，同时丢弃两者中最糟糕的部分，如果这有意义的话。
我很高兴你喜欢这个故事，因为这是我做这个项目的首要任务。我是一位出版过两本书的奇幻作家，有近 25 年的写作经验，我的专长是角色。我觉得我可以利用这项技能，真正提高成人游戏中情感联系和故事深度的标准。我很高兴看到它产生了预期的效果。
我试图让一些内容尽可能真实。我当了 12 年的保安，还教过跆拳道，所以写出我所知道的内容意味着每个场景的细节都是可信的。尤其是那场打斗场景。我真的想奖励那些恰好拥有这种打斗知识的人，我很高兴它能跨风格翻译。我很好奇你练习的是什么武术。我祖父年轻时是洪拳的学生，这也是我最初接触武术的原因。
我没有任何语言的官方翻译计划，但如果中国市场对这样的项目有很高的需求，我肯定会考虑。我很高兴你玩得很开心，谢谢你提出在中国互联网上推广它。我以前在 italki.com 教英语的时候有很多中国学生，我对这个地区及其各种文化情有独钟。
再次感谢您的赞美！
我很高兴我们有同样的看法，你将故事性和H场景结合的很好，取其精华去其槽粕是很困难的，但是你做到了。以及，我练习的是我爷爷改良的山东民间武术，可以说是“长拳”的分支，我也懂一些太极拳、现代格斗术、以及巴西战舞（没想到吧）。再次，我真的很喜欢的游戏，请持续更新下去，我什么都会做的
Found an oopsy...
So, most older security radios, including the ones I've worked with, have attachments you can put on them such as lapel mics/parrots or sleeve/earpiece attachments. They still require the base unit to function. What I'm trying to sell here is that there is the base unit on his waist and he's got it hooked up to a sleeve mic. Unfortunately, Ai Shoujo doesn't have any really good cord attachments (or didn't at the time) so I didn't bother trying to show the attached "cord." You'll find I did the same with Galka and selling the illusion of a parrot/lapel mic.
Good eye for detail, though!
is it just me, or did you put a couple of tfs dbz abridged lines as references in game 🤔
Oh absolutely lol
😂👍
can the girls get pregnant?
No, and I don't think that's a kink I'll be adding for a few reasons, one of which being the science of the worlds. Most species' biology isn't compatible with human biology. So if that's a kink you're looking for, sorry to disappoint, but no plans to add pregnancy thus far.
WCA is a lot more about the story and the emotional connection than the kinks, though, so if you're hunting for a specific kink or fetish, there are way better games for that. If you're looking for story depth and emotional tension, where intimacy really means something, that's more in line with what WCA is about. Yes, we do explore certain kinks, but I find it hard to include things like pregnancy because it's something I'm not into, and writing something you have no love of can really feel cheap and do it a disservice to those who DO like it. And I don't wanna do that with something that someone loves.
Hope that makes sense :)
yea, though my thoughts on the pregnancy is not much of a kink, i would say it's a way of life to cross the bridge with someone you love and to boost their confidences to make them feel loved and the meaning behind it, it's only natural to give the one you love a world that you can share that love with through thick and thin.
That's a really good explanation, and I can sort of see what you mean when you say it that way. I'm still tossing around the idea of individual ending scenes for each girl when you complete her side story, but being a harem story, I'm not sure how well that'll work. And I still may be the wrong person to write it, as someone who is never having kids. But I do appreciate your explanation and perspective.
Hey VectorSeven,
I gotta say you have one hell of a game here! Extremely well made with a great story. One of the very few vn were i did not mind the slow burn at all. I do have to ask one thing though, as I played through the android version I seen on the comment here that there is 49 characters story's to go through and I barely have 20 ish. How do I get the dlc and some of the extra characters or are they only in the pc version?
Hey! The 1.0 release saw the Season 1 Rework, completion of Season 1, and finalizing of backend systems so there will be no more restarts.
We're currently on Season 2, and a lot of content is still being made. None of the DLC characters have been released to supporters or public yet, and only about half of the Core cast even has side story scenes. A lot of the content is still being made. We will have a side content patch out within the next couple of months that will bring 4 girls up to a total of 5 side scenes each. After that, there will be a main story patch.
Thanks for the kind words! We have a wonderful Discord community, and you're welcome to join!
Two things first I love that we can fight that asshole buSIR that preview makes me want to fight him again I can't wait for a new updat
Glad you liked the fight system. That took so damn long to get right lol
Is it finally time to download the update and start a fresh save to see what all has changed and what new content there is? *looks at last progress report* 2 days ago... good news... aight, I wait a little bit longer then! Lol
Hey! Since the 1.0 release, all backend systems have been finalized. If your last save was in the beta version (0.*.*.*), this is the last time you'll have to restart. If your save was from a version after 1.0, you won't have to restart at all.
The story is currently on Season 2 Episode 3, and the next update will be a side content wave featuring 4 girls and a surprise scene from a secret 5th :
Main story will be updated in the patch following to Season 2 Episode 4.
yep, read the most recent lil progress log you posted which is why I said I will wait for the next update to start over. I had already seen others bring up save issues and your reply about having to start a new save, and since I last played when this was 2 separate "games" I will most definitely have to restart lol. Which is still good, I get to see if anything has changed then I get to see what you have added :D
Ahh you played before the Season 1 Rework. It's definitely a better experience now. I think you'll be happy with it.
honestly I already liked it to begin with, so that really makes me look forward to picking it back up soon :D